Thursday, 12 February 2015

The Glittering Tide

                          A Glittering Tide
Creeping, slippering, Crawling, hurriedly.........
Until its drawn aback by a terrible force
Which force is stronger, mine or yours?
Creeping, slippering, Crawling hurriedly.........
Oh bright maiden shine
Your glitters on my beautiful face
Make the sly foresee a lie
Wet, cold, damp as it whisk your strenght away
Trust its beauty not, as it is cunny as as a bunny
Throw a precious jewel, throw a crappy bell
Yet it rest at it coast trying to lure you in
Soft Nd silky as it whisks it's shades away
The swash lashes like a caveman's whip
The tide inspired my deepest thoughts
You only see what you want to see in me
So it says to everyone
Poem was written by my 16 year old sister "Aminah" She wrote it within 15minutes of showing her the picture above  and brought it back and was like here, "a poem for your picture" and then she turned and saunters away like the dramatic queen she is.  Its amazing I know, buh hell no!  I wont tell her this, her head is bigger than lagos city already won't want it to explode.
P.s My next blog is going to be about Ekiti state or Ogun state.... and I promise I wont make you wait too long.... Thanks

7 comments:

  1. Bera!
    No time to be waiting. If not ild port when you see dz deel free to delete it. Tianz t

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  2. Nice poem...foisa

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  3. OMG....this is unbelievable, I mean from an SS1 table!!! Wowww. More God's guidance I pray

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  4. I see a great poet of tomorrow! She's amazing! Where do those words come from?! I try to imagine. I can't even think! God bless her plenty!!!

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  5. There is a different from a raw unfiltered piece and an edited piece... this is raw and thoughtful, it take a mature mind to filter thru it... well done Aminat, May Allah increase your knowledge. .. Mo'BakareIllustra you ve gat a rare gem as a sister.

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